To Dos

A O'Malley

• Clarify that Seamus did not come out under seal of confession.

Ainsley Cameron

• Clarify in Ainsley's sheet that Amy's mother is dead.

B Truman

• Needs more emotional connections to other players, and probably a bit more plot in general.
• The Board election went way too easily.

C Lennart

• She was basically hosed as soon as the police thought to ask for the records of who card-keyed into the Lab. Can we rework this in some way, so that the police have a fair chance of figuring out the cover-up, but it doesn't point a laser beam right at her?

F Ronit

• Felt the lack of a direct assistant. Maybe make Jamie Rickie more directly and explicitly involved in the campaign.

J Ferdinand

• Change the name to match the latin heritage (eg, Fernando).
• From the first run:

  For a Latina character in a game with a Catholic priest, she really needs to have an opinion on Catholicism. She could be religious, raised religious and deeply ambivalent, raised religious and strongly rejected it, or even raised by ambivalent parents, but should should have some relationship to the religion.

Jonathan Sheena

• Change the name to be less like Josh Sheena.
• From Jan-Willem:

  Move info on Jamie Rickie into relevant part of sheet with short reference down below. That confused both of us!

M Caoilinn

• Rename this character -- her last name is simply too hard to spell, and typos caused problems.
• In the first run, she didn't have enough time to interact with Tagh. Make her relationship with Finlay friendlier, and have her offload a bit of the workload.

R Forrester

• Post-game comments from Ben:

  I was pleased with the game and considered it to be a nice start to the con. I found myself concentrating on roleplaying over detective work because I found no evidence other than what the extreeemely close-mouthed people deigned to say, which was a cocktail of nothing, contradictions and lies. By the end of it, my report could only be an embarrassing "I got nuthin', folks."

  I wasn't allowed in the building, and no one would give me any info. Even eavesdropping got me told to go away. Only the fixer was of any help, and that was in the last 15 minutes.

  Perhaps an ally or a breadcrumb to follow in the character sheet might be helpful. If you put those in but I was unable to decode them, please disregard.

  If all else failed, the roleplaying aspect was great!

Roger Cameron

• We need the contents of Roger's email account to be accessible to B Ari. This specifically needs to include one or two snippy emails to and from Jamie Rickie. Note that Ainsley knows her father's password.

S Kiran

• Character was simply weak. Possibly merge with I Zubin?

Seamus O'Malley

• Show the presentation audience about To Do.

Tagh O'Malley

• From Conor:

  I really enjoyed it, and the only thing I'd see improved is that Aidan and I didn't manage to spend enough time together, which we clearly should. I'm not entirely sure how to fix this - maybe if the two are slightly estranged and have some catching-up to do?